Mystery of Jin
  by Nicole  |||Answer a quiz about this story||||

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"We wish to call the spirits and ask for them to come and talk to us," Nicky, Kate, Grace and I said as we sat in a circle with candles. "We don't wish to harm, only to see!"
candles As we were sitting there I was thinking to myself, "This is never going to work; it only works in movies."  But then, all of a sudden, the glass started to shake and we heard a voice of a teenage boy saying, "My name is Jin. I've come down to ask for a favour of you........ I need you to find a belonging of mine that I left in your house, Nicky, when I passed away." We all sat there looking at each other, shaking with fear and astonishment.

"Yes, alright....." we all stuttered to the invisible boy.

"What is it?" I asked while trying not to freak out.

"Well, it's one of my great treasures...." he said as he started to appear. "It's one of my great, great grandmother's jewels that she got from India and I would like it back since it is mine. But your mother's wearing it Nicky!"

As he finally appeared, Nicky whispered to me, "Wow, he's yum - but this is sooo freaky!"

I shook my head.


The Next Morning

"Wake up! Wake up!!" exclaimed Grace into all of our ears.

"What!!!" we all yelled back at her.

"I found it! I found the jewel that Jin wanted us to find!!" yelled Grace.

"Oh, my god! Are you serious?!" Kate exclaimed while jumping out of her sleeping bag.

"Of course I'm serious. I would never joke about something like this," Grace said while trying to catch her breath. We all looked at it. It was the most beautiful thing ever!

After breakfast we all managed to forget about the jewel.

Later on that night we called Jin again and told him about the jewel. He was amazed and he thanked us for it and said, "Thank you once again. Now, since you have done something for me, I shall do something for you." But he wouldn't tell us what it would be.

We all said goodbye and went home the next morning.

That night Lotto was on TV and my mum had bought everyone tickets.
"And the numbers are: 5, 6, 17, 11, 21 and 32. Congratulations to all the winners tonight!" said the Lotto lady with a gigantic smile on her face.

"OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! I won! I'm rich, I'm rich!!!!" I screamed with excitment while I started to dial everyone's number on 4-way.

"You guys will never guess what just happened!!!" I screamed, "I just won Lotto!!"

"Oh my god! So did I!" my friends all exclaimed into the phone.

Straight away we all went into Newmarket and town to go on a huge shopping spree, and to this day we've talked to Jin every weekend.

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